insane enough to post this *Uploaded things are on first post*

Started by thoraxglycerin, March 15, 2009, 03:47:00 PM

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thoraxglycerin

Ok, you know that i've an other thread, right?
the pic was worse, and my skills were very *********** and after realizing that,
i decided to look on some internet forums on how to draw.
So there's a new pic, but this time an another sketch.
I have ideas of making a comic, manga, whatever...
So i'm going to improve this pathetic skillz of mine.
But for the first time, just endure it.

Ahh and i hope you can show me something to improve,
as i know i am not good at drawing ears noses hands and clothes, including the anatomy.

Heres the pic:



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Update:
sketches:
http://img259.imageshack.us/gal.php?g=halfbody.jpg

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Update:
This was made on Wednesday, awful isn't it?


This was made on Friday in school, inked with my fineliner  :P


This was made, while i was bored of my "earn pocket-money on saturday job", i tried to show it a upside down view, for my first try it isn't that bad.
But still...  I must practice more.  ;P


After that my parentsforced me to go to a marriage of some friends of my father, so i made these, while they enjoyed the wedding.
You can see that i totally suck with the anatomy, but still a bit ok... but not satisfied at all :(
And yes... slowly i am able to draw decent hands... need far, far, far more practice:


And then i tried to draw a face alone, again. Pleas don't mind the pistol (or whatever it looks for you), it's embarrasing:


And thanks for the head tutorial, it helped me a lot :D

Now a tryin sketch with some details and stuff, tried to make it dynamic or give it some body expression, but you can see, i need really much work with the legs and it's thingies:


After than, i came home and photographed them with my mobile-phone (is mobile-phone written right?), uploaded on imageshack and  brought it here.


If you know, what i should improve more, except the shadings (i still try'em privately >_<), give me advice or/and some tutorials, so ican orientate myself a bit more :D


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Update: 1. April




which is better with the legs?


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Update: 3. April





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Ok, on 5th April, today, i will start.
everyday i'll make one to two pages and upload it here, so i can show what i'm capable of for now.
And while doing it, it's alos a practice to be better :sugoi:.

Uploading it in a short time.

[edit]

here it is :
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Update:
It's really hard for me to deal with the anatomy, so i learn more about the anatomy. So the thread
is for now on a hold. Just till i think, that i make a big step on anatomy.
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Update :
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

ARCoolguy


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thoraxglycerin

as i said, i must practice a lot
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

spidy

its look awesome nice work button is not good

Hackers Never Cry

thoraxglycerin

made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

Rorschach

Most important thing is that you learn some human anatomy. Your drawing skills are good but i can clearly see that you do not know how long or width some things must be. By practicing you will learn. But other then that it looks really decent so keep up the good work ;)


Quote from: 1nfrn0 on February 20, 2009, 11:00:22 AM
About 24 pics......
Spoiler (click to show)
varying in size of course....:P

Quote from: Anjel on March 03, 2009, 06:09:29 PM
He would have hurt it if he did all the shit 1nfrn0 requested.

thoraxglycerin

so, when i practice some more, i could work on the things i think about? :D
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

spidy

Practice Makes A Person Perfect :P ;P

Hackers Never Cry

ARCoolguy


Monkey D. Luffy W.I.P Thanks to C.R.O.M Lando

thoraxglycerin

made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

Zain574

Quote from: spidy on March 15, 2009, 07:27:46 PM
Practice Makes A Person Perfect :P ;P

There is no such thing as a person who is perfect.
Spoiler (click to show)
Or is there :ninja:
Spoiler (click to show)

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moolambo

you can at least rotate the drawing 90° as people here can see it better, but maybe you're too insane to do it.  ;)


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Quote from: spidy on March 15, 2009, 07:27:46 PM
Practice Makes A Person Perfect :P ;P
But no ones perfect, so why practice?[/sarcasm]
RIP Michael Jackson
Spoiler (click to show)

♠Treasure Sniper

ZOMG local PH movie line

OT: pic looks weird to me
Quote from: TSUKASA013 on April 05, 2009, 06:35:53 PM
oh tobi stop playing with robots and penises.

thoraxglycerin

don't know how to show it rotated in 90 °.... --;
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

walt

#17
Spoiler: I rotated the image (click to show)
Open image in Microsoft Paint:
-> Image Menu
-> Flip/Rotate (Ctrl+R)
-> Rotate by angle (90°/180°/270°)

Read this tutorial on heads/faces. It's very basic, but then again, so is your problem  ;P
On the bright side, you're good at identifying details like eyelines and hair, so try making a face using the face structure tutorial, but keeping those details in.

thoraxglycerin

Quote from: The Mighty BBP on March 18, 2009, 04:27:54 PM
Spoiler: I rotated the image (click to show)
Open image in Microsoft Paint:
-> Image Menu
-> Flip/Rotate (Ctrl+R)
-> Rotate by angle (90°/180°/270°)

Read this tutorial on heads/faces. It's very basic, but then again, so is your problem  ;P
On the bright side, you're good at identifying details like eyelines and hair, so try making a face using the face structure tutorial, but keeping those details in.
yeah thanks!
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

thoraxglycerin

i'm participating on a drawing lesson from saturday to sunday from 10.00 to 17.00.
So i can learn some things about anatomy and so on. ;)
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show