Origanal charecter sprite - Izuka (Update.. again)

[DjFoxfire]

My first try at making my Fighter, Izuka. I know its not that good but some feedback would be nice.

(old)


Update.....

(How about this.........?))

(new)
(Stance)


(Crouch)

[thoraxglycerin]

it looks nice, but in my opinion:
- his upperbody and head are not so suiting, i don't know. Maybe it's only my imagination. 
- his two arms aren't seem to look to be in the same lenght.
- from where comes the light? If it comes from the above, the face has some missing shadows, i mean you should colour it a bit darker
  (for example: Light green <-> dark green)
 

As i said, in my opinion. you 're the creator and there are much more persons, who can help you more than i can.

[DjFoxfire]

it looks nice, but in my opinion:
- his upperbody and head are not so suiting, i don't know. Maybe it's only my imagination. 
- his two arms aren't seem to look to be in the same lenght.
- from where comes the light? If it comes from the above, the face has some missing shadows, i mean you should colour it a bit darker
  (for example: Light green <-> dark green)
 

As i said, in my opinion. you 're the creator and there are much more persons, who can help you more than i can.

Well I edited the face and im not good at shading    ...but ill fix it

Im probably goin to do it over again, i was trying to go for a teenage like fighter but now that i look at him he's a little too buff for that.

[†KillerMondless†]

Study the faces of Kof characters and I think you woill have a good sprite done though shading does need some work too.

[thoraxglycerin]

it looks nice, but in my opinion:
- his upperbody and head are not so suiting, i don't know. Maybe it's only my imagination. 
- his two arms aren't seem to look to be in the same lenght.
- from where comes the light? If it comes from the above, the face has some missing shadows, i mean you should colour it a bit darker
  (for example: Light green <-> dark green)
 

As i said, in my opinion. you 're the creator and there are much more persons, who can help you more than i can.

Well I edited the face and im not good at shading    ...but ill fix it

Im probably goin to do it over again, i was trying to go for a teenage like fighter but now that i look at him he's a little too buff for that.

Yeah practice it, or continue your fighter.
In both ways you'll improve
so you'll gain enough skills to fix the previous sprites.

[DjFoxfire]

Thanks to the both of you 

[†KillerMondless†]

Everything is trial and error so just take your time to try and figure it out and you'll get it eventually. Thats how it worked for me when I started spriting...

[DooM]

My first try at making my Fighter, Izuka. I know its not that good but some feedback would be nice.

What base did you use for these pants? they look real nice.

Concerning the whole edit. Just work some more on his face and flat chest and the belly.

[thoraxglycerin]

ahh... here speaks the one with more experience.

[c00p]

What base did you use for these pants? they look real nice

this is from D4RK_R4V3N's sig

there's a thread here with the "intact" sprite, but i'm not gonna search it 

[TITAN MADRE]

^ why?

[thoraxglycerin]

looks better, unfortunally the upper bodyi a bit weird, can't tell though...  ???

[DjFoxfire]

looks better, unfortunally the upper bodyi a bit weird, can't tell though...  ???

Yeah, im trying to find a character that has a tanktop thats not rip. (ryu, ken, sean, akuma, etc....)
The best I could find was the guile's....

[moolambo]

looks more like a frankensprite.

[DjFoxfire]

looks more like a frankensprite.

Hey.... give me a break. Im new to editing.... 

anyway, *Update*

[moolambo]

well, I just said that is not an original sprite, didn't say it sucked or else. I just wanted to be picky about it. 

[DjFoxfire]

well, I just said that is not an original sprite, didn't say it sucked or else. I just wanted to be picky about it. 

Its hard too please nowa days....

[ARCoolguy]

Nice the old one looked very bad compared to this

[DjFoxfire]

Nice the old one looked very bad compared to this

Tks.... but im still have trouble animating it so...yeah i have a long way to go.

[FeLo_Llop]

What base did you use for these pants? they look real nice.

He used a sprite made by DarkRaven and didn't give credit. 

Being noob it's not an excuse. I was noob and never used other's work. It's all about respect.