Exia

[Jed]

ok fixed I hope 

[†KillerMondless†]

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[Jed]

 

[Orochi Gill]

Those legs and shoulders look like a mess

- The pink has zero shading
- They look like blocks
- (Artist's) left leg looks like someone snapped it like a twig

[Jed]

ok I fixed it 

[S.D.]

Fixed what? What Soda Popinski posted still applies.

Also, the GN sword should be longer and the shape is just wrong.
Use lineart to at least match the proportions, this is pretty bad at the moment.

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Don't worry, you suck as well.

[Jed]

Fixed what? What Soda Popinski posted still applies.

Also, the GN sword should be longer and the shape is just wrong.
Use lineart to at least match the proportions, this is pretty bad at the moment.

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Don't worry, you suck as well.

LOL dude I done better and it doesn't still apply I had to edit off some ells bad base so as much as you trying to say it still applies it's not my fault



Edit:
1. ok I forgot the shield I fix that in a bit
2. the shoulders might need some work but i think it's the shading
3. that pink stuff is light no shading is needed
4. proportions? like what the feet or something i seen the feet they look that way
6. over all I do used line art to look at it anyway so it is a lot closer to the real thing then ya think





Ok fixed if not I'll try again tomorrow