The design is good, but still need some improvements, most of them on her lightsource, especially on the hair.
About the animations there are some jumpy parts: head, right hand and left leg. Her hair could use some animation, her breasts too, not so much as Mai's but she could work out as reference.
I edited the animation a little - timing, head and right hand. The animation itself is not bad, some work will make it great:
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