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Hanako-san character (Read 2138 times)

Started by Freddery II, July 19, 2011, 01:57:09 pm
Hanako-san character
#1  July 19, 2011, 01:57:09 pm
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I am going to make Hanako-san for Mugen. If you don't know who Hanako-san is, she is a Japanese ghost that haunts the girls bathrooms. You can find more information here: http://pinktentacle.com/2010/04/hanako-san-terror-of-the-toilet/

Here is the sprite I made for Hanako-san
Tell me if I need to change the sprite any. please tell me what you think I should do about her attacks. Lastly, Hanako-san is going to be a long project so don't expect it to be soon.

Edit: I changed the sprite just a tab bit.
Last Edit: July 20, 2011, 01:23:20 am by Freddery II
Re: Hanako-san character
#2  July 24, 2011, 12:44:50 pm
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If it's a ghost girl, it's not really scary enough. It just looks like a sick kindergartener.

I myself worry about this project because of your not so stellar approach to feedback and previous coding efforts....


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Re: Hanako-san character
#3  July 24, 2011, 01:41:13 pm
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If it's a ghost girl, it's not really scary enough. It just looks like a sick kindergartener.
Agreed..

Judging from the pictures on the link, i can only say this much,

-What is missing from the sprite when compared to picture-
change her eyes a little
give her darker red on her skirt
add some details on her hair
add some blood stains
Change the color for the eyes to dark red and a little black

and that's about it..

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Re: Hanako-san character
#4  July 25, 2011, 02:00:49 am
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change her eyes a little
give her darker red on her skirt
add some details on her hair
add some blood stains
Change the color for the eyes to dark red and a little black


Is that good or do I still need to fix the sprite some more?
Re: Hanako-san character
#5  July 25, 2011, 05:12:59 pm
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Looks better than before, just that there's something odd that i can't elaborate on  :-X something about the hair's detail

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Re: Hanako-san character
#6  July 25, 2011, 06:28:28 pm
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what should I do about the hair detail?