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Jonathan Joestar- POTS/Infinite/Divine Style (Read 10209 times)

Started by AceAcguy, November 12, 2014, 07:18:13 am
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Jonathan Joestar- POTS/Infinite/Divine Style
#1  November 12, 2014, 07:18:13 am
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Look at this, my first (complete) character, or an edit of Divine's Yuka, if you really want to look at it like that.
So yeah the worst first JoJo in that style that we all seem to like.
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Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/zj2verq2bigc1yr/JoJo.7z
Feedback appreciated, though I am somewhat busy this week so it may the me some time to make the fixes.
Last Edit: November 13, 2014, 07:08:16 am by AceAcguy
Re: Jonathan Joestar- POTS/Infinite/Divine Style
#2  November 12, 2014, 07:30:13 am
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"This item might not longer exist or is no longer avaliable"

Uhh.. Where's the Char?
Re: Jonathan Joestar- POTS/Infinite/Divine Style
#3  November 12, 2014, 07:53:38 am
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Shit, I set up the link wrong, hopefully I fixed it.
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#4  November 12, 2014, 07:55:42 am
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That level 3 hyper portrait really needs clean up. I see a lot of white edges going on.
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#5  November 12, 2014, 10:31:12 am
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Feedback coming in 3..2..1..Now:

-Hitspark's semi-misaligned on some normals (worse on his air kicks)


-His backdash doesn't have any invincibility whatsoever.

-"Gethit" spark on Johnathan is mis-aligned.


-I have a feeling his parry is mis-aligned too (Both of them).


-His Hitboxes are really bad. And when I mean bad, I mean they're either too big for reach, or just doesn't make any lick of sense.


-His HKs could use some slash sounds rather than the physical hitsounds.

-I have a feeling that the "Power-up"/custom combo system (Z+C) doesn't work properly.

-Is there any reason why if you press forward during a jump, a tiny red hitbox appears?  (You can make the argument that it's supposed to be for an air parry, but idk, it doesn't seem right)


-Both Crouch HK and qcb lk play a sound twice. (One as a "physical" attack sound, the latter being a voiceclip)

-His Super-startup spark is mis-positioned, which oddly focuses on other parts of his body rather than the mid.


-So how come this super projectile of his is blockable on standing.. even though it looks like it hits low?


-What in the world's going on with his throw?


-His Lvl 2 Projectile super still has Yuka's voiceclip.

-How come his Qcfx2 K super stop everything in sight, like the superpause is still going on?

-Speaking of which, why make it invincible anyway?


-No Super-startup sound on his lvl 3?

-In fact, his Lvl 3 makes no sense whatsoever, other than it's just a regular beatdown.

-His projectile is a corner infinite.

(The reason why it shows his super is because I accidentally ended it with a super, but yeah)

-If you spam dodge, his animation loops.

This is all I have for now. But in short: This Jonathan still needs a lot (And I do mean A Lot) to be worked on.
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#6  November 12, 2014, 01:14:52 pm
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That Pots JoJo really needs a lot of work for being complete, but this is a good start at all. :)
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#7  November 12, 2014, 05:52:38 pm
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Your link still doesn't work.
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#8  November 12, 2014, 08:05:10 pm
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#9  November 12, 2014, 08:34:58 pm
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Yup an link to Mediafire would be ok IMO.
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I think the only H-Character I ever got was that Black Raiya edit and she had a super that forced the foe to suck her cock while classical music played.
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#10  November 13, 2014, 12:49:15 am
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Alright, I've partially updated, but because that link is down I'll put the transitional version up on mediafire.
Partial Update entails:
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I still have a lot to fix, but I can't get to the rest of it today, hopefully I'll have it totally fixed by next week.
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#11  November 13, 2014, 02:17:57 am
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Finally a Jojo character in pots/divine style

My Feedback to you
.  Ripple Wave animation needs to be better
. Dash Animation (ask a custom spriter)
.  Hamon Comb and  Silver Metal Overdrive needs better animation
. Midnight bliss animation
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#12  November 13, 2014, 03:40:13 am
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What on earth is with his KO cry?
There was a sig here. Its gone now (thanks photobucket ya fecks)
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#13  November 13, 2014, 07:01:15 am
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Me somehow completely forgetting to change that, I'll update it really quick
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#14  November 13, 2014, 05:28:43 pm
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Okay, his Alpha Counter glitches out and some Super KO text from Divine's Yuka is left out.