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My first character - Shrek (Read 19642 times)

Started by mugenisjustfine, January 01, 2009, 09:50:05 pm
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My first character - Shrek
#1  January 01, 2009, 09:50:05 pm
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This is my very first char in mugen so it isnt that good. please give me feedback and PLEASE tell me if he's missing any sprites or if he has any glitches. thanks. I also might update him soon with special attacks but I might fuck him up.


NEW DOWNLOAD LINK: http://www.sendspace.com/file/vqrv72

OLD PICS:


NEW PICS:

Shrek's new move, barrel throw (Down + S)

Shrek's new move, rock throw (Down + Z)

And now Shrek can send out Donkey to help him (Down + A)

Last Edit: January 10, 2009, 03:49:10 am by mugenisjustfine
Re: My first character - Shrek
#2  January 02, 2009, 12:24:44 am
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Uh... Not really much to say. Hitsparks are mis-aligned on every attack..
His Air and Crouch attack don't hit.

I think you should have worked on him more, before releasing him..

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Re: My first character - Shrek
#3  January 02, 2009, 01:42:40 am
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*pachi pachi pachi*  :o congrates on your first character ill try him out ^_^

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Re: My first character - Shrek
#4  January 02, 2009, 02:14:00 am
he needs a Icon
Re: My first character - Shrek
#5  January 02, 2009, 02:29:34 am
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he has an icon

he just doesn't in the pics b cuz there  old
Re: My first character - Shrek
#6  January 02, 2009, 02:42:22 am
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It would be a good idea to use NEWER screenshots when releasing something.
Re: My first character - Shrek
#7  January 02, 2009, 03:57:42 am
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dude why do u always have something negative to say and y r u always mad? calm down
Re: My first character - Shrek
#8  January 02, 2009, 05:42:04 am
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It's not negative, it's constructive criticism...

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Re: My first character - Shrek
#9  January 02, 2009, 05:49:09 am
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and advice.

Since newer screenshots show off more of what's been done to this point.
Re: My first character - Shrek
#10  January 02, 2009, 05:54:02 am
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Re: My first character - Shrek
#11  January 02, 2009, 07:05:58 am
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lol everyone says that about Nathan  :P

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Re: My first character - Shrek
#12  January 02, 2009, 10:28:57 am
Re: My first character - Shrek
#13  January 02, 2009, 05:40:37 pm
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there is not constructive criticism  >:D

i allways wanted to kick shreek's ass
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Re: My first character - Shrek
#14  January 02, 2009, 05:56:52 pm
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-What folder am i opening?
     i. Include one folder for the character, so people won't get confiused on which one to open and play. Also get rid of the .pcx files in the .rar file.

-This is officially the smallest file size i ever downloaded for a MUGEN character.

- Include a readme to tell what you an do, and give credit if needed.

- Missing all required sprites int he .sff groups 5000-5002 : 5010-5012, ETC... Look in your MUGEN docs to see the sprites, better yet click this go to sprites standard. look at the diagram to see how the sprites should look.

- As said hit sparks are misplaced, in the hitdefs look at "sparkxy" to adjust the placement of them, you should be able to figure it out with mall adjustments to them.

- All he has are normal attack based off of nothing but the template, that fighter factory gave you; there's nothing wrong with that. I do think it would be beneficial to start a character who's going to pose a challenge to make; someone with more sprites. Of course you have a lot to know first. The knowledge that you're missing is not about intelligence it's about memory, so once you gain it, it will not be an issue anymore.

-The character basically feels less than Kongfu man in diversity.


I'm not going to say i think, i know you rushed the character, you were rushing from the beginning to release. Keep in mind that this is not a race and you don't have to rush. This character could have taught you all of the basics if you took the time to learn.

I suggest when making a character, when you test always have the debug on; that way you can see if you are missing the required sprites, or if you get an debug errors from anything else.

I hope you have the determination to learn more, it's better to take some time on your first character, you get beter as you go along.

cheers, Rajaa :)

Re: My first character - Shrek
#15  January 02, 2009, 08:41:37 pm
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well i jyst updated him. i fixed his crouching moves
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#16  January 02, 2009, 08:45:16 pm
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Re: My first character - Shrek
#17  January 02, 2009, 08:47:51 pm
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wtf does that mean?
Re: My first character - Shrek
#18  January 02, 2009, 08:50:07 pm
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Work on him some more.. add specials.. supers, required sprites. -_-


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Re: My first character - Shrek
#19  January 02, 2009, 08:55:45 pm
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^ that

it mean you updated a crouching move, rather than the REQUIRED things.  :-\
Re: My first character - Shrek
#20  January 02, 2009, 08:57:17 pm
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