My first two characters

[greetlock]

Here's the link for Ninja, my first mugen creation by editing KFM (don't laugh )
and Dragon (edited Fei Long).... I haven't uploaded Sulfur(fire Venom) or Evilsagat because the video was too big, and I have to do it again (when I get the chance)

Ninja
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lodEf0GduLQ

Dragon
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zwzR5HHdu78

(LOL, they change color, I have to fix that in the "shared pallette" option)
BTW, the stage in which Ninja appears, is a crappy space station that I made, and now I'm working on a better one (the one Dragon is in, 2% complete)

[Lobo]

Here's my input:

- Your ninja styled kfm looks more promising than your dragon character. I'd say focus on him more.
- Now looking at your character thus far it looks decently coded however I will need to see the clsn boxes and the actual coding itself to give any real deliniation.
- Work long and hard on your sprites. If not then obtain some sprite effects for your character or enlist the aid of an artist.

[Kensuke]

Lower the damage on soe of those moves....


also stick with ninja.. and make sure the shared pallete is applied to all your sprites if you are making this for winmugen

[tetsuo9999]

Dragon is suppose to be Dragon from World Heroes?..

[Lobo]

Dragon is suppose to be Dragon from World Heroes?..

Probably a tribute to bruce lee in the form of fei long with dragon from world heroes moves.

Again stick with the kfm styled ninja and instead of ninja give him a creative name. I'd go with njm (ninjutsu man) but that's me.

Your dragon doesn't look too promising.....unless you do it with kfm

[C.v.s The Abstract]

Dragon is suppose to be Dragon from World Heroes?..

yes if u havent notice the special kick feilong did with the dragon then yeah taht one of dragon moves from worlld heroes

[Ichierzen]

I'd ditch the Dragon WIP, if I were you...if it's supposed to be a MUGEN version of Bruce Lee, then you've already been beaten by Capcom, since Fei Long was created to resemble BL. I could go further, but as others have said, it's best to mainly focus on Ninja.

I like the Ninjutsu Man name idea, suits the KFM motif more. Personally, he doesn't look too bad, try to make him his own, if you know what I mean.

Otherwise, good luck!

[greetlock]

Dragon is suppose to be Dragon from World Heroes?..

Probably a tribute to bruce lee in the form of fei long with dragon from world heroes moves.

Again stick with the kfm styled ninja and instead of ninja give him a creative name. I'd go with njm (ninjutsu man) but that's me.

Your dragon doesn't look too promising.....unless you do it with kfm

That's a good idea, I just named him "ninja" just to enter a name and test him in the beginning, and then it eventually stayed "ninja"

[greetlock]

Dragon is suppose to be Dragon from World Heroes?..

Yes, sort of. Since I didn't have the original Dragon's sprites and didn't know (and still not sure) how to rip sprites, then I just used the Fei Long sprites that I had and gave him Dragon's moves, but I never made Dragon's fists of Fury, instead I made Fei Long's fists automatically hit three times after the first hit. And I used Bruce Lee in the profile because both Dragon and Fei Long were obviously made to resemble him.
BTW. I also used Fei Long sprites because they look better than Dragon's sprites, but I love Dragon.

[greetlock]

Thank you all for your input, I personally didn't care that much about "Ninja" anymore, but now that you mention it, I'll try to give him some more love. My only problem is that even tho I'm an artist myself, either I don't know all the tricks to make sprites, or there's just no tricks and only patience to make them. Because if I have to draw everything from scratch, then it's going to take me forever to make the characters I really want to make - Dark Shadow & - Greetlock, and more sprites for Ninja. As for the programming, there has to be a lot of unnecessary crap in there because I learned thru Ninja, and I didn't have the "docs" folder when I made him, when I did get a newer version with the "docs" folder was when I decided to make cooler characters. (but I haven't)

BTW. I have two other characters that I haven't done by myself, and I wouldn't want to post them cuz I dunno if this offends you guys. Thing is, I made an Evil Sagat, and a fire Venom (Sulfur), but I only made the adjustments, I didn't rip the sprites, or create the hitboxes, or write the programming, I just added on to the already made character, so...
...what do you guys think?