Troy, an original character (used to be Shin)

Started by Dominic Maraschiello, January 17, 2010, 12:23:01 AM

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Dominic Maraschiello

So... I decided to start making a mugen charcter and I wanted to make him from scratch. The only thing I have done right now is the pose and the palletes.
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Portriat Finished:
Icon Finished:

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Flamekyo

Any in game screenshots,

the sprites looks good
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Dominic Maraschiello

Quote from: MOTIVE on January 17, 2010, 12:37:53 AM
Any in game screenshots,

the sprites looks good

No. Not yet but, I will try and get them as soon as possible.

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Flamekyo

alright cool,

im just asking to make sure it's a real w.i.p 

Good Luck  ;)
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Dominic Maraschiello

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screenshot:Stance

screenshot: Select Screen

screenshot: Versus Screen

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Lunchbillion

Hey, props for using an original character and sprite! Does he have a backstory?
Nice portrait btw.
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Dominic Maraschiello

Quote from: Quack on January 17, 2010, 02:02:31 AM
Hey, props for using an original character and sprite! Does he have a backstory?
Nice portrait btw.

No. Not really. I just thought of doing it one day but, I will try and create a story for him.

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Dominic Maraschiello


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Lunchbillion

It looks kinda stiff. Try making his head turn or something in the frame where his arm is extended. You could also
try bending his other arm a bit.
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Mechy

sprites are pretty sloppy, they lack shading and the poses look really stiff

and Shin is a really overused name
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ScottaHemi

looks nice to me, though i do agree he could use a little more movement perhapse in his upper body ;)

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Metroid Budgie

He has really baggy pants. It seems like the animation is good but the head is kind of weird. Also,

Quote from: Lolmechy on January 17, 2010, 02:27:27 PM
Shin is a really overused name

Other than that, it looks like this char has potential to be worth playing.

Dominic Maraschiello


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Lunchbillion

I can't really judge the hard punch animation when it's looping so fast.
Make a gif of where Shin is in his stance for a second, then performs the hard punch. And hold the frame where his arm is extended for a tad longer.
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Dominic Maraschiello

Sorry I have not posted in a while but,:

I totally revamped the sprites and made the charcter taller.
I have also, changed the characters pose and look.
I will have sprites up as soon as I can.

I will be doing a story for this character also.

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Mishulika


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kakkoii superhero

for his jab there is no reason for his pants to move unless you make movement on his leg, or shifting weight or changing foot stance.

his hard punch is very stiff, the back foot movement is too wild, and you need to make effect for shifting body weight to convey the impact of the punch, and also since he changed his leg position apart to each other & also with bending knee, then his total length/ height should be shorter than in his starting position.


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Dominic Maraschiello

Sorry I have not been posting. School caught up to me.
At the moment, I have not made any Gif's but, I have the jump, crouch, first intro, and stance done plus all the palletes.

Here is the new sprite.

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