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Started by flipthemaster, May 01, 2008, 12:42:08 AM

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flipthemaster

I would like to know your opinions on this sprite. I'm trying to get him to look like the drawings below it.



Bastard Mami

sprite > drawings

You might want to make the sprite's legs longer, otherwise it's perfect.

Shindoh

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Quote from: Satou Sei on May 01, 2008, 02:18:07 AM
sprite > drawings

You might want to make the sprite's legs longer, otherwise it's perfect.

Yes, legs (from lower end pelvis to lower end feet) on an usual adult are same the size in length of the area from "lower end of pelvis" to "upper end of head".  ;)
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Pasty

I love the style and colors.

inktrebuchet

i love the sprite, its a cool style. and i like the proportions too honestly.

keep it up! it would be nice to see that animated.

DehvidTillos


flipthemaster

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Quote from: DehvidTillos on May 02, 2008, 01:02:51 AM
It looks really nice... :D

Thanks, he supost to(might be if I don't have any trouble) be the final boss character for a game our group is working on so his animations have to be really detailed. I'm trying to make him seem like a cross between slayer from guilty gear with Venom :sugoi: but I can't think of any specific animations or ideas for his attacks though. The idea is that he seems laid back with venom like animations (where his skin and suit come off his body and attack similar to venom ).

Bastard Mami

Take a deep look at the design of other characters, both from a graphical point, but more importantly, to their techniques and  how they relate to martial arts/sport. kof characters are specially informative.

roseille

Cool concept. His upper torso has some problems, though. Either his head and left (looking at him) side needs to be raised, or his left shoulder and upper body needs to be lowered.

TITAN MADRE

wind:

shirt: X
jacket: -X
smoke: Y

keep that in mind ;)

flipthemaster

Updated with a new animation

MDI

Quote from: flipthemaster on June 28, 2008, 01:58:14 AM
Updated with a new animation


Thats fuckin awesome man..the sprite style reminds me of Darkstalkers or Jojo, but with a cartoony feel to it.
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flipthemaster

I added yet another animation, I think the outline needs a little more work.

Iced

Needs a couple more frames for him to move the right leg towards the front, as it is now he seems to be continuously dragging it

flipthemaster

I edited it a little with the leg positioning
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Some Random Guy

Quote from: flipthemaster on July 16, 2008, 04:20:43 AM
I edited it a little with the leg positioning
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new:


You have some pretty badass character designs. This guy looks like a real asshole - maybe it's the sharp teeth and cigarette that do that (no offense to smokers, or people with sharp teeth for that matter).
The legs on his are much better done, but the rest of his walking animation still looks really jerky.

Blind.

Wow realy oryginal
And this sweet smile on art :]

flipthemaster

Newest animation for character.


Jessy

I like the face and idea... ;) looks weird..
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