bah...

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Do not save as jpg, use png instead.

Too sleepy back there, forgot to save as png. Photobucket converted my bmp to jpg.

Now, a finished version:


Tell me ANY problems in this sprite, Rika sempai, and I'll fix it in the instant!

*Lucky Charat in High Morale Mode*

While I wait for you're reply I'll do a jumping sprite.

Of course, anyone and comment here, as usual. I am more than happy to listen to any complaints.

=edit= halfway on my walking animation

[Mineko C. Lucky]

I'm about to finish the walking animation now...

I just want to ask, how do you align jump sprites? Place it at the center or do you have to imagine the jump curve?

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Here's a nearly finished walking Rena, just requires modifications on all the upper movements and the folds.



Comments please, if there are faults. 

Another will be on once the intended Rena is completed, also sent to spriters-academy.

Off to jumping after this.

[Bastard Mami]

You can use a cheap trick and make the leg that's behind one tone darker.

[OZ]

My main issues I think have already been acknowledged by

just requires modifications on all the upper movements and the folds.

Without upper body movements, it looks suprisingly robotic. Kinda creepy.
The dress looks very stiff at the moment.

But you have already addressed this.


Legs work for a walking sprite.
Though may I suggest adding more shading to the leg at the point you can see it through the dress.
Add that to what [E] just said.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Unfortunately I lost the "perfect axis" and my remade sprite looks horrible and jiggly. Expect my sprite to show up though, about 1 hours later.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Faster than I intended though, I forgot the actual timing. But, I just can't finger it(the problem), there's something wrong here... I want feedback. (make it harsh)

I'd better take note of how I did to position the sprites next time...

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Figured out 1 of the sprite's problems - the dress turns out moving in the wrong places. So I should observe how the dress moves on a girl when she's walking.
HIDDEN TEXT HERE==>Or myself walking
There's still something wrong, looks like I should check the graphic resources section.

I triple posted in my own section .

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Now it looks natural, I feel satisfied with the result, I found out my problem when I am checking angryanimator.com. I haven't even started with the details though, thanks to nio I'll know what to do to make it pretty.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

I lagged behind and dawdled too much... but anyways I finished the animation and is starting on jumps.

I can't post today though, it's too late now. I'll post in the morning.

Turns out great, I am satisfied.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Any more comments to improve this? I can't seem to go any further.

Jump jump, boing~

[Mineko C. Lucky]

That one's a previous mistake on the folds that makes it look like a neon sign, and I've updated it again:



Comments? No? Perfect? Mediocre?

Oh, that's right! I got a great idea! Once I finish this, should I make a nekomimi character? It is completely original, including the sprites and moves and stuff.

[DrPotem]

That one's a previous mistake on the folds that makes it look like a neon sign, and I've updated it again:

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv169/nekoneko_heaven/RenaNormalWalk.gif

Comments? No? Perfect? Mediocre?

Oh, that's right! I got a great idea! Once I finish this, should I make a nekomimi character? It is completely original, including the sprites and moves and stuff.

is fine, but the face should move a little
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está bien, pero la cara debería de moverse un poco

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Thanks T.T ... Or the thread will look like I am talking to myself...

I'll see into it.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Nearly done, looks like I am VERY slow:

Excuses Reasons:
1. Too lazy
2. Too busy
3. Preparing for university

Or, someone should scream at me for being a sloth.

[kakkoii superhero]

cute looking face  , her walking pose is kinda stiff, her body should bounce a little, including her purple bow on the back and her hair (depending on the direction of the movement). and the way she holds her arms and hands are weird, seems like she is a waitress with an invisible tray.
and when she walk like that the front slit of her dress, should move too, or at least flapping since it constantly touched by her legs or knees.

and depending too much on a single sprite as a base. need to draw totally fresh sprites 

[Iced]

Nearly done, looks like I am VERY slow:

Excuses Reasons:
1. Too lazy
2. Too busy
3. Preparing for university

Or, someone should scream at me for being a sloth.

Screams at you and bumps it back up to the front page.

[Mineko C. Lucky]

cute looking face  , her walking pose is kinda stiff, her body should bounce a little, including her purple bow on the back and her hair (depending on the direction of the movement). and the way she holds her arms and hands are weird, seems like she is a waitress with an invisible tray.
and when she walk like that the front slit of her dress, should move too, or at least flapping since it constantly touched by her legs or knees.

and depending too much on a single sprite as a base. need to draw totally fresh sprites 

very nice and useful comments there. Thanks for the problems you've given, I'd liked to say this a long time ago but I left it at that time as I'm not free enough to do sprites, they take a long time and I'm no pro. I'll look into it.

Nearly done, looks like I am VERY slow:

Excuses Reasons:
1. Too lazy
2. Too busy
3. Preparing for university

Or, someone should scream at me for being a sloth.

Screams at you and bumps it back up to the front page.

Thsnk you, thank you very much, I appreciate it - Elvis Prestly

[Mineko C. Lucky]

I'm going to redraw again, though it may be different, a 3-week holiday is nice. This does explain the more silent prescense nowadays.

[Iced]

You do what you must and what you feel like, if you need advice and help, checkout with walt and rikard, they are very nice spriters and could be useful.