New Jin Kazama

[ARCoolguy]

New Jin Kazama for WIP plz comments and suggestions so that i can improve this time I am serious

[DrPotem]

 

[bubilovescars]

Mkay?

[Randomish]

Needs shading

[Byakko]

Need to look like a human

[Alkanphel]

 

[FeLo_Llop]

Well, you have improve since your last attempt.

Now, i suggest you to try to improve more (mostly those irregular outlines) and trying to make something with the shading.

I'd tell you about to forget of abds right now, that's a difficult part to sprite.

And why Jin is white haired?

[ARCoolguy]

give me some suggestions on how to improve the shading no matter how much i try i cant seem to get it right

[FeLo_Llop]

See, this is the process I follow:

Spoiler (click to show)

As you can see, I just make green outlines above her and then select ONLY those green with photoshop, then change the greens with the darkest flesh tone and fill inside it with the previous one. Then, adding the muscle shading and going into details.

Hope this works...

[the_mith]

Although felos method requires some artistic talent, I would suggest to go back to drawing with a pencil on paper.

Learn how to shade etc on that and when you start being able to draw characters well consistantly then try to sprite again. You'll probably be better at shading and propertions by then and I'm sure you'd see a huge improvements on your sprites.

Most importantly, don't rush your art! You don't have anything to prove here, just take your time and have a little patience

[Yoda]

you should burn in hell 

[GT]

And why Jin is white haired?

Going by DBAF standards he is ssj5, "Sayajin".

[Gonbjon]

All I can say is examine other sprites with a similar pose.

[Duo Solo]

I laughed for 2 minutes straight, sorry. But yeah, the sprite reminds me of KFM. I think you should just draw with pencil and paper. Use Flash to color in the outlines and your Jim will look good. Thats what I plan on doing for my character.

[kakkoii superhero]

you should learn to make curve in pixel, so the area that should be smooth wont look broken or jagged like on that shoulder area, or if you have difficulties with lines, use KoF/snk style since it doesn't need outline, but you use highlight and shadow instead to form the mass of the body, personally I think it is easier to be done.
BTW his ribcage is too low.

[OKP]

New Jin Kazama for WIP plz comments and suggestions so that i can improve this time I am serious

WTF is this!!!

[∀CH]

New Jin Kazama for WIP plz comments and suggestions so that i can improve this time I am serious


http://foto-uploaden.nl/img2/zozno5n.png

Need me to fix it, BOY ?

[ARCoolguy]

New Jin Kazama for WIP plz comments and suggestions so that i can improve this time I am serious


http://foto-uploaden.nl/img2/zozno5n.png

Need me to fix it, BOY ?

yes plz do fix it
I will be really grateful and it will help me identify my mistakes and fix them

[kakkoii superhero]

∀nti-∀nimeBoy now you have to fix it... you have promised! 

[∀CH]

∀nti-∀nimeBoy now you have to fix it... you have promised! 

Yeah I have promised to him !!



What's wrong with your Jin:

neck too short
Not enough darker at black part
The left hand's too big

Others? Check by yourself.