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Started by sasuke-master, January 20, 2011, 06:27:36 pm
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Sasuke Uchiha
#1  January 20, 2011, 06:27:36 pm
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Hi everybody, this is my first topic but not my first edit.
For oldest ones, see my deviant art: http://lord-master.deviantart.com/
This one is Sasuke from Naruto of his fight against Itachi.
Hope you like.

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Re: Sasuke Uchiha
#2  January 20, 2011, 07:09:26 pm
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sorry for the criticism, I just think it may help you to know:

hair are pillow-shaded
there's something wrong in his face profile ( I mean his facial expression and his nose )
he looks like he has boobs
there's no great solidity in his arms and legs
light source is confusing
hands lack of a correct perspective

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Re: Sasuke Uchiha
#3  January 20, 2011, 11:52:42 pm
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jiaozi said, January 20, 2011, 07:09:26 pm
hair are pillow-shaded
there's something wrong in his face profile ( I mean his facial expression and his nose )
he looks like he has boobs
there's no great solidity in his arms and legs
light source is confusing
hands lack of a correct perspective


It would help if you:
  • lowered the shoulders & arms
  • highlighted the hair in vertical streaks (the way his hair falls)
  • made his calves & thighs a bit skinnier
Last Edit: January 21, 2011, 01:17:37 am by hogaraka

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#4  January 21, 2011, 01:29:25 am
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adding all other comments mentioned already:

-check the waistline, if you're not familiar in drawing clothed human figure directly (can't imagine their naked figure proportion mentally) it is better to make the basic figure first, then add the other loose fitting clothes on top of the correctly proportioned figure.

and also the attractive way of how cloth bulges or falls.. that flabby thing when the black top meet the skirt thing is ugly

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Re: Sasuke Uchiha
#5  January 31, 2011, 04:02:21 am
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Judging by the proportions of your sprite, I'd say you're using Sanada from SBX.

couple things:
light source, chose ONE. You have light coming from two sides on his upper body lol.
lighten up on his chest definition, he practices taijutsu, he doesn't lift weights. And square it up, it looks like boobs. lol
thin out his calves.
widen his waste line. I know Sanada's waste line is small, but you're making Sasuke lol. Naruto characters tend to have a very "boxed" styled body.
oh, and lift his brow if you want to give him the nonchalant signature look.
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Re: Sasuke Uchiha
#6  January 31, 2011, 05:38:18 pm
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YES! MIDNIGHT BLISS SAUCEKE WITH C CUPS
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